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Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

Loved this! Such a fun, creepy build-up, and that ending left just enough unanswered to make my imagination do the worst possible things with it. Also, I have to say… Solomon is awfully suspicious. Very “innocent cat” behavior, which of course means he probably knows everything.

Salt & Pomegranate's avatar

This was genuinely unsettling. Theo’s nightly routine created such a strong rhythm that every small disruption felt amplified.

I really liked how “Better safe than sorry” changed from reassurance into something tragic, and the final image of the garage door closing with “a patient click” was really chilling .

Also, Solomon was the perfect addition. I trusted him almost as much as Theo did.

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