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The Small Stackers's avatar

This story will now serve as my proof and my last line of defense to anyone who thinks involuntarily tickling is funny. (My older brothers)

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Lara's avatar

Uh, a nice little horror read , thank you!

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Sincerely Seb - Poems & Horror's avatar

Thank you for taking the time to read it, I’m glad you enjoyed.

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Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Wonderful. Great work in conveying that sense of helplessness. And I like how you imbued the tickle monster with such a sinister nature. Great stuff!

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Sincerely Seb - Poems & Horror's avatar

Thank you so much, those were things I focussed on so aim glad they came through!

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Nora O’Dowd's avatar

Yes indeed!

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Quinlee's avatar

I'm a sucker for good horror that takes classic concepts and gives them new life. The way you described the monster was truly vivid and eerie!

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Sincerely Seb - Poems & Horror's avatar

Thank you for the feedback, I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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