Discussion about this post

User's avatar
Tsetsy's avatar

There’s a real sense of burnout and pressure in this, and you put it into words in such a sharp, relatable way.

Expand full comment
Dawnithic's avatar

Seb, your poem captures the heavy weight of monotony and inner chaos. The ticking clock, the search for “sugar,” and constant frustration reflect a mind trapped in cycles of exhaustion and self-reproach. Lines like being “blindsided by yourself” show the raw struggle with one’s own restless thoughts, making the poem a stark, honest look at the clouded mind.

Expand full comment
7 more comments...

No posts

Ready for more?